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Actually, yes, Shay does know her enemy. It's Tern and his army of spectres, Ifrit, and Itsuyayuh...or it's having to fold Zeph's dirty socks. One of the two.
Okay, yes, title from the song Know Your Enemy by Green Day xD i was listening to it as I drew. Well...they were performing on Stephen Colbert, which I was watching. So there you go. Um. Read over some COPIC tutorials, realized what I was doing horribly, horribly wrong (mainly skin and hair shading, and oh yeah making stuff look like it had depth) and did this one to um IMPROOVE AWOOGA aaahanyway. Yes, I can read the writing in the frisked up pentagon thing (or I could if marker + Leelee's handwriting didn't look so awful). But you can't. It could be detailing the end of the world for all you know. Or it could just be my complaining about how my Runic handwriting sucked. AND NO, IT IS NOT CHINESE. There is nothing farther apart than Runic and Chinese. Believe me, I take Mandarin. I would know. so yeah. Typical random Shay, clashy scarf, short stripey 3/4 dress, long grey jacket with clockworkysortof designs and short sleeves. -that jacket is so Madeline's Anyway. Requesting crit on this one, so let me tell you the things I am aware of/were actually intentional. Um...static pose ;-; sorry gaiz. This was a practice pic most of all. Other than that... critique away? Yyyyeah kaybye Shay Eaststone/Spellrunners/Runic/THAT AMAZING JACKET (c) to me ;D song inspiration- Green Day tutorials used- every single freaking COPIC tutorial in the world Comments
Mmm, my progress tastes like rocky road P:
and thank you and YES Shay is so confident in her abilities that she'll walk around in her undies xD much to the mortification of...everyone she knows and to the delight of the local guys of course -- I\'d like to make myself believe/ that planet Earth turns slowly/ it\'s hard to say that I\'d rather stay awake when I\'m asleep/ \'cause everything is never as it seems... ~Fireflies, Owl City NaNoWriMo 2009? NaNoName: SwiftstarDawn mmm menfolk
okay then...Chocolate chip cookie dough <3 with Kissables in it yaaaayyyy omfg those things are so good @3@ -- I\'d like to make myself believe/ that planet Earth turns slowly/ it\'s hard to say that I\'d rather stay awake when I\'m asleep/ \'cause everything is never as it seems... ~Fireflies, Owl City NaNoWriMo 2009? NaNoName: SwiftstarDawn I LIKE THAT VEST/PULLOVER/JACKET THING!! (I dunno the english word TT^TT )
anyway, I love this pic!! -- /l、 ゙(゚、 。 7 l、゙ ~ヽ じしf_, )ノ I'm member of ~Sea-Salt-Club |
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Something I've noticed about all your humans or otherwise humanlike-beings, they have amazing design and your knowledge of anatomy is getting better every day, but you need to work on symmetry. That in itself, symmetrical features (Such as face shape, eyes, other facial features, and other things like shoulders and torso/hips) seem to be one of your biggest issues.
Also, clothing folds, on most of your characters, seem to drag away from the overall shape. >': There are folds where there don't need to be, and if they are in the right place, they seem to be the wrong type of fold, going in the wrong direction, or you have them perfect in every way except they are too think/thin, or too long/short. In my oppinion, the folds seem to give the wrong idea in shape or thickness, etc in body parts.
On another note, her hair is epic<3
But besides the technical stuff, you can tell, with all of your characters, that they have some sort of story behind them, and you make me reaaallllyyyyyyy want to know what the story is. Keep up the good work!
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